Striking opening- sets tone well
Need a sparkle between james and elsa- first time theyve met.
Singing-haunting but lovely
Wooden coat hangers needed-make coat characters 3D.
Violin entry needs more defiance.
Tricking scene think about dynamics and the reasoning behind us doing it and the consequences if we dont.
Shoe sorting-already sorting shoes and then audience walk in?
Daisy needs to be more present and observe/see more
James needs to be more truthful when ursula dies because of the loss of music-more humanity needs tl be seen through james and his love of music.
At end-facts needed.
Gassing audience come earlier?
Work on intent and merging shakespeare into our plotline
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